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Timeless eh...?
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Author:  Iceman [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 12:50 am ]
Post subject:  Timeless eh...?

Seamless silent no emotion
Never alters from his path

Always follows never leaves us
All must answer to his wrath

Cold and ancient, hard and silent
Has no need of masters voice

Incoherent to the masses
friend of no-one by his choice

Father time is much less father
more akin to spoilt child

Keeps us moving ever forwards
Careless reckless free and wild

Titled folk would give their kingdom
To delay his marching feet

He has no respect for ranking
No-one is allowed to cheat

so squander not a single second
ever mindful time's intent

He will rob you in a heartbeat
moving onwards till your spent

Enjoy the day enjoy the hour
Every minute, seconds too,

For time is master has the power
Sheds no tears for me and You.

Open up your mind to others
seize the day and make your stand

Mortal sisters mortal brothers
caught in 'times' relentless hand

Author:  HogstanceBilgecrack [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:08 am ]
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Yet another splendid effort,
Mr. Iceman, me ol' mucker!
Only fools would deny that
You're a talented mother...

8-)

Author:  Iceman [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 1:17 pm ]
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Praise indeed from one so good at writing verses that seldom disappoint Hoggy, I thank you very much for your kind words and glad you enjoyed it ! :D

Author:  Witch [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 9:36 pm ]
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Fantastic as usual Iceman.

Author:  Iceman [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 9:52 pm ]
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Witch wrote:
Fantastic as usual Iceman.


;) Thankyou Witch x

Author:  Gwenllian [ Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:00 pm ]
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very true iceman x

Author:  DebraCobra [ Mon Jan 30, 2012 5:31 am ]
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Another great poem! :D

Author:  Nydas [ Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:15 am ]
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Terrific and oh so wise!
Great thanks
xxx :D

Author:  Meadow [ Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:13 pm ]
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:lol: Could have done with reading this early this morning Iceman! Internet's been off all day. Just come back on, I'll bet you've all enjoyed the peace!

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