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Author:  HogstanceBilgecrack [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:36 pm ]
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I'm here my love
Don't be afraid
Her hand held gently in mine
Loving squeeze not reciprocated
Trying to smile
No disguise for knowing eyes
Drifting deeper and deeper
Into her Morphine dream
Rest now sweetheart
I love you

Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:55 pm ]
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Oh dear, you're going to make me sad. Very moving.

Author:  Witch [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 9:13 pm ]
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Sent a shiver down my spine,

really felt it.

:cry:

Author:  Baggage [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 10:48 pm ]
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I've just wathed the documentary about assisted suicide. Very appropriate and moving :|

Author:  Nydas [ Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:32 am ]
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Lovely poem Hogstance, really moving.

Baggage, I watched that, hardly ever watch TV but sat down and there it was. Really thought provoking wasn't it, well done I thought.

Author:  Baggage [ Mon Jun 20, 2011 10:55 pm ]
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I was in floods of tears :( I know I'm pathetic, but it was so hard to take in. Self-centred I know, but reminded me of similar times and provoked an emotional reaction.

Author:  Gwenllian [ Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:04 pm ]
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I've sky plussed it I know I'll be in tears so waiting til I feel really strong to watch it :)

Author:  ClaraJaneGreeves [ Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:19 pm ]
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That made me cry Hoggy. Life can be so heart breaking and painful, but thank God for love. :cry:

Author:  HogstanceBilgecrack [ Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:41 am ]
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Many thanks for the comments! 8-)

Author:  evenaive [ Tue Jun 21, 2011 9:43 pm ]
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That is very moving - I just read it to my sister as I remembered it from reading the other day and wanted to share it with her...because it is so touching.

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